Day: February 16, 2005

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Is All Copy Editing In Vein?

See if you can pick out the error in the first sentence of this press release from the IEMA (emphasis helpfully added): The newly proposed violent video game legislation in California smacks of me-too politics in a vein effort for local politicians to garner some perceived moral high ground when clearly there is none to […]

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VGO Editor Says Ballmer Headlines are "AMAZING!"

Some more headlines following on the recently highlighted one. Template: Headline (My comment) -Source Ballmer: Xbox 2 ‘Amazing’ (In other news, “Bush: Evil ‘Bad’”) -Seattle Post-Intelligencer Ballmer: “Xbox 2 is going to OWN Sony” (Or Microsoft is going to buy them) -Xbox365 Ballmer *hearts* the new Xbox (I *heart* Huckabees) -Prodigious Gaming “Xbox 2 is […]

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